Posted by: Jonathan Caswell | June 25, 2011

CLOSER CALL


CLOSER CALL

A man courts women for a sale

With tactics he finds never fail…

On the way, though it seems

They appear in his dreams,

A delicious sort of travail.

A shyster like “The Music Man”

Can’t always follow through as planned…

There’s a chance to be caught

In commitments fraught,

Desire to stay with this band!

More often commitment is gone

As the inspired rogue moves on

To other conquests

With salesman-like zests

Learning how to sell on, and on.

—-J.E. Caswell


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