Posted by: Jonathan Caswell | July 19, 2011

DOWN TIME


DOWN TIME

Sometimes it seems like a crash

Is imminent with no more room to dash,

As though fish hooks

Whale-sized in looks

Impede our progress with a splash.

Everyone wants their money

In a way that is never funny.

They’ll get it in spite

Of not doing right…

The letters get more and more “dunny”.

I wish I could just stop it all

But others will lose if I fall,

I have to go on

Despite being pawn

In a game of another’s  beck and call.

I must be nice to tormentors

To be sure proper info. is entered…

The price I must pay

Whichever way

I go will throw me off center.

Forgive my complaining this way,

Things will improve this next day…

I’m sure I’ll get through

Somehow, I will do

Whatever needs doing…okay.

—Anonymous (a friend of Jonathan’s)


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