Posted by: Ron DuBour | April 25, 2014

MUDDY~by Indira Sadanandan


 

 

MUDDY

Clustered column of rain
Overhead
I couldn’t count the petals
The rose you gave,
At departure
I walked away stepping
Over the pits
My poems turned
Muddy in


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  1. Wonderful. Love the last four lines particularly.


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