Posted by: Jonathan Caswell | September 8, 2017

TANKA: ECHOES 8–COLOUR TO WEAR–wonkywizard:


TANKA: ECHOES 8 – COLOUR TO WEAR mirror on the wall wear coloured shirts to feel tall save the ringgit from fall colour behind coloured shirts new brands hidden under skirts

via TANKA: ECHOES 8 – COLOUR TO WEAR — wonkywizard


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  1. Thank you for your interest in my poetry: in line 3, the should be deleted to follow the five syllables in a tanka.

    • That’s okay–I just misspelled the name of my own bank! 🙂


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