Horizon’s Voice
“Blue Horizon”
Painting by Karon Melillo DeVega
From fineartamerica.com
I am horizon
celestial seam
where convene
men and angels
in purpose
more noble
than flesh
more human
than holy
I am horizon
a meeting place
realms of creation
convergent
enabling exchange
of learned wisdom
in mutual aid
of abiding
respect
I am horizon
edged joinery
piecing the land
sea and sky
treelines drawn
from the hemlines
of heaven the end
and beginning
of everything
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
By: Paul F. Lenzi on July 28, 2015
at 11:04 am
thank YOU for allowing me!
By: Ron DuBour on July 28, 2015
at 11:13 am
First of all, i’d like to say i love that watercolor. Second, i like the way you wrote it. Definite hidden rhyme scheme, it may be “messy” as the ones that believe the only true verse is a steady rhyme scheme, i look at it as it is, free verse.
By: awmaynard802 on July 29, 2015
at 7:54 pm
I say hidden rhyme scheme because only those that can really understand what you’re saying and how you’re making it rhyme truly understands the “hidden” part of hidden rhyme scheme.
By: awmaynard802 on July 29, 2015
at 7:59 pm
try 4 sentence stanzas, first line 8 syllable second line 6 syllables 3 rd line 8 and 4th line 6 to begin with your second line ending words and your forth line ending word should always rhyme try this and let me know this will help a great deal, Ron
By: Ron DuBour on July 29, 2015
at 9:44 pm
I’ll try it. It might take me close to a month or two. My thinking process isn’t the best.
By: awmaynard802 on July 31, 2015
at 8:37 am
you will do fine!!! keep at it
By: Ron DuBour on July 31, 2015
at 9:38 am
I will.
By: awmaynard802 on July 31, 2015
at 3:54 pm
I forgot to put after the i will that i’m trying to put an old one on amrapoetry, since it’s the most recognized of the sites.
By: awmaynard802 on July 31, 2015
at 3:58 pm